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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-02-08 12:24 PM

Will I think of you ....
only when the sun whispers--
good morning
only when the breeze
causes my lashes
to dance

Only while watching
the steaming coffee
in the mug
pressed between my
palms...
only when the stars
give me a midnight
show and glide
across the skies

Only when I close my eyes
and find you there...waiting
will I think of you?
Only, forever... Will that do?

© Copyright 2001 Snow - All Rights Reserved

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 2001-02-08 12:37 PM

Very nice, Snow!

Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

2 posted 2001-02-08 12:41 PM

Your pen delivers infinite passion, in a few passes across the page.

I love it, Neve!

  Robert Joseph
   ~ek~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-02-08 12:29 PM

So...soft...and hopeful...lovely....

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-02-08 05:49 PM

That will do, gently.
Nice write, snow.

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 02-08-2001).]

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-02-09 11:48 PM

Hi Snow,

This is so lovely, very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-02-10 04:18 AM

'will I think of you?
Only, forever... Will that do?'

Hmmm...great lines, snow! Wonderfully put!

sp

...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2001-02-10 06:12 AM

Snow,
Terrific write there, well articulated.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

8 posted 2001-02-10 11:51 AM

This is wonderful, Snow. It's one of those I wish I had written that things.

Goodness knows, I've tried. You did well.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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