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Waking to Reality |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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my heart sings like a bird of paradise floating upon feathered wings of love my heart is a velvet flower blossoming floating gracefully as a white dove floating in the solace of a dream within the discretion of deja vu floating in a nest of whip cream the night, ultramarine blue darkness is sparkling with diamond dust upon the branches of frozen champagne dizzy from the wings of winds gust awakening to the smell of acid rain upon my feet is mud from earths crust sleepwalking towards a weather vane A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is truly astonishing in it's imagery--I love the contrast...this is your best yet Victoria....HUGS to you. BEAUTIFUL. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Of all the lines here, "floating in a nest of whip cream" is the most enchanting  S |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful ~V~ your talent is so amazing...always a pleasure..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Serenity..thank you im so happy you were pleased with my poem Serenity..nice to hear from you Sandra..Whip cream does sound good doesnt it haa..thanks Sandra..glad you enjoyed hon. Greeneyes..Thank you Lauren...nice to hear from you tonight..and thank you for your lovely comments.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Victoria, I like this muchly. Lovely write and imagery. A pleasure to read. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Victoria~ What wonderful, wonderful imagery...well penned indeed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Poeminister and Tracie for you nice comments...thank you for peeking in ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
So dreamy I love it. your writing always takes to a place I long to be. Love and light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Rich, whip cream is on sale at United haa...  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, each word a singular blossom...lovely work, as always Robert Joseph |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What an exquisite picture you paint for me to start my morning!! You are, as I have always said, a true artist, and I do so love to read your canvasses full of color and light!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Robert..nice to hear from you...missed your poetry..and thank you for peeking in today Sunny..thank you for your inspiration and your kindness...so nice of you to say ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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