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I Love You
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I Love You |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I would be your reality For all the world and my heart to see, All you have to do is say And I'd be yours forever and a day, I dont like being hidden and lost But I know our love comes at such a cost, So somedays are all with which I dream Somedays and poems my fate it seems, I love you! I love you! that will never change Even though kisses we've never exchanged, I love you!I love you!you're my hearts desire I love you! I love you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
makes me smile..on this cold wet snowy day... enjoyed your words ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I think you love him! Sweet poem. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello my twin... Oh how good it is to find you in love, and writing, and just being you!!!!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love, sweet love, you have said much in a short space, Paula. Wonderful. Sandra |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
What torture that must be! I know how sometimes you just want to shout it from the mountaintops! Great write, Paula! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a very passionate call from the depths of the heart Paula.....It's very sad and melancholy beauty that you've penned here.....good write!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula dear heart, this is utterly truly wonderful. Oh how great is the beauty of love in your heart, and it's shining all over this poem. I love it a fabulous piece love and sooooooooo great Take care love you sister mine Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My kind of poem hon...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wynter...so glad I could bring a smile to your face...thanks JLR...never a doubt...thank you Sunny...thanks twin of my heart...me is all I know how to be... Sandra...doesnt always take a lot of words just to say I love you...thanks sp...yes...to just once be able to say out loud...but there ya go...someday...maybe...thanks Eric ...sad only in that I am unable to say whats in my heart...out loud...thank you sweet poet Marsha...you just bring a smile to my face...love ya sis James...you and I think alike now dont we? Hugs my friend |
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