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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-01 01:05 AM



Warm kisses trailed to his ear where I whispered
I love you so much
lay back darling
let me show you.............with touch

Soft searching hands
found chest and made bare
massaging his back
slowly.....with care

His pants, eventually,
found their way to the floor
my man in his glory
for my eyes to adore

........his body.......with mine......
I did explore
satisfied and sleepy
couldn't ask for more

Wrapped so sweetly
in afterglow's light
dreamily I wish him
sweet dreams............goodnight


~SEA~

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-03-01 01:20 AM


Well, for his sake, I hope you didn't jump up and write this.
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-03-01 01:22 AM


Ha, Ha, good one Vas....hey Sea what a sensual piece you've written here....fantastic job!

Nathan

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VAS~ making me laugh out loud........ no silly.....I waited a while........


Nate~ thanks

~SEA

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4 posted 2001-03-01 02:21 AM


SEA
Sweet Dreams, huh... How could he not have sweet dreams, and I do believe he had a good night. But he will need a shower in the morning though to wash off all that afterglow.

Garfield

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5 posted 2001-03-01 02:24 AM


SEA~
NOW who has the midnight longings ????
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-03-01 04:15 AM


And it all started with a kiss...James
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7 posted 2001-03-01 02:10 PM


WELL now...
this puts a whole new spin on imagery dont it
yowzers me girlie...
youre steaming up the place ...
and i like it..i like it lol
veeerrry nicey and spicy Sea...
very cool write on a hot topic
way cool indeed.
love this side of your writing
later-hot-stuff-gator


Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

kaile
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8 posted 2001-03-02 03:24 AM


this is HOT!!
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9 posted 2001-03-02 09:20 AM


SEA!....well done!
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10 posted 2001-03-02 09:43 AM


Very hot write and tenderly sensual though I will have to admit I would rather have the words share an image of what HE saw instead of what you saw. I did enjoy the read alot never-the-less.
Dennis
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11 posted 2001-03-02 09:49 AM


ya know, I've been trying to edit my (passionate) big laugh- everyone, I mean my sensual writing...whooo mama, am I in the wrong forum! Lucky man-yours!

Dennis

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..........what can I say?...... I'm a giver...... Sorry, couldn't help saying that...... thank you all so much for your wonderful replies......Mark, I'll save THAT poem for later.......lol........ SEA
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13 posted 2001-03-02 06:29 PM


A very seductive .....Sweet dreams....Goodnight.
my man in his glory,for my eyes to adore.
YOU GO GIRL!

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14 posted 2001-03-02 10:29 PM


okay SEA, if you don't come over to Adult right now, you just might fry everyone's eyes with stuff like this!!!

wow. . .

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WhtDove
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15 posted 2001-03-02 10:33 PM


Indeed missy, you might end up in Adult soon! LOL

Some pretty steamy stuff coming from you lately.




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but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


SEA
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16 posted 2001-03-02 11:45 PM


I don't think I'm ready for Adult.......lol, maybe one of these days I'll go check it out......thank you.... SEA
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17 posted 2001-03-03 06:25 AM


Sea~
Sensual suits you just perfectly....Great
writing...the perfect mix of tender...and
spice!

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