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Moonlight Becomes Me - Stolen challenge from Sunshine to Marsha
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Moonlight Becomes Me - Stolen challenge from Sunshine to Marsha |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Moonlight becomes me on my way Way of hope makes brighter day Day by day, I'm lifting me Me to become more real, you see See my hands they do not shake Shake the world; or else forsake Forsake all, to lift me high High above I touch the sky Sky of day is scorched by sun Sunlight sears, brings me undone Undone by day imbued with light I become me… in moonlight. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brava....Brava!...stolen, no....borrowed, yes!....well done, little one! Write On! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ok, Suni, Borrowed and now returned! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this style...excellent writing. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Keth~ Way ta go girl  this little one's fantastic, great read~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Kethry, I enjoyed this poem so much... A great write sweetie... Thank you for the splendid read *~coco~* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is great Keth...fantastic writing |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, anything I have I'll share with you love, (and if you feel the urge to do my challenges, then don't hold back kid  ) Why won't anyone believe me when I say I'm constantly on the lookout for a few minions. (Not that you're a minion, unless it's as one of the favoured few. )Excellant work love it truly is, and a far better job you did dear heart, your star is arisen. I love this one and it goes into my library with all the others. It's in the Kethry wing, Take care love as always Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Poeminister, it's always a pleasure when you stop by. Tracie66, a new logo in honour of three thousand posts. Thanks for reminding me! I not good at math I've missed one and two and now three thousand. Well never mind! my talents must lay elsewhere, but I'm not sure where!  Coco, thank you for your kind words. Paula, it's always a pleasure when friends drop by. Marsha, I'd be one of your minions anyday, heck I'd be you doormat if you asked me to. That's what friends do.  be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Splendid job you did Did acomplish it with such style Style becoming to you my friend Friend and doormat in one One never knows just what we'll find Find within a heart so kind of one with a talent so splendid *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ the images........ "I become me… in moonlight." puts into my mind are enchanting.......beautiful poem -SEA |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow Kethry, this really is a beautiful little creation. I'm so glad I didn't let this one slip by me. Well done ~Becky~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, Rats! you made it look so easy! Now my secret is out, I'm a borrower or a burrower or some such! Thanks. SEA, I'm glad you liked the images, Sven and I seem to have a thing about moonlight recently. be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beckalini, oops! sorry I let your response slip by, thanks for telling me what you thought. be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, friends don't walk over each other and sisters of choice certainly not. This truly is wonderful my love, absolutely excellant. And congratulations dear hear on 3000 plus and Oh how much you deserve a banner and extra special treats Take care love Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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