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Open Poetry #12
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NC
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since 2001-02-20
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0 posted 2001-02-23 09:11 PM

what i see through
your eyes...
a landscape ravaged
empty riverbeds
grass, dry and
threatened by
approaching sun

you turn from me...
but not before
a fragile seed
slips from
your hand...

slowly, i walk
across the field
across your silence
at first, aware of
only footsteps
hitting ground
but then...
a smaller sound
a shift of earth
from deep inside
where something
pushes

upward
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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-02-24 01:13 AM

I can put some thought into this one, and I like that
Very nice
NC
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since 2001-02-20
Posts 89
2 posted 2001-02-24 05:33 AM

thanks for taking time to read
and comment, Rex
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