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Red-uni
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0 posted 2001-02-23 12:19 PM


Sensuous

Words that are so sensual,
blossom forth from deep inside.
Where were these feelings hiding,
that showed easily without restraint?
They came without forewarning,
strong and guiltless for the moment.
A side that has not been seen
springing up it seemed from nowhere.
Sliding without notice to the surface,
like a damn burst out of control.

Red-uni © 2/00



© Copyright 2001 Kathy Bonet - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2001-02-23 12:42 PM


RED! You FINALLY made it here! Its so wonderful to see you! I haven't had the pleasure of reading your writing in a while, and I must say that I enjoyed this alot! A taste yet, I am sure. I can't wait to read more!

ggrn3
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2 posted 2001-02-23 12:51 PM


Red
This was very interesting. I really liked it. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Garfield

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-02-23 12:56 PM


echoing the sentiments of those above---intense
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2001-02-23 01:00 AM


Welcome to the family! This was excellent! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting.
Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-02-23 01:04 AM


I agree. Your talent is a welcome addition to our little place in the sun....welcome!
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-02-23 07:06 AM


A welcome from all corners....this is wonderful, and we look forward to reading more!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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7 posted 2001-02-26 04:14 PM


It just takes the right person to inspire words we didn't know were in us. *S* Welcome!
Martie
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8 posted 2001-02-26 07:16 PM


Red--ya never know what the muse is planning ...enjoyed your poem..and welcome to Passions.
Voiceless
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9 posted 2001-02-26 07:28 PM


Nice!!
Hey and welcome!
Well done!


~*Peachy Be*~

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2001-02-26 07:36 PM


Once the damn burst and the words find a way to flow there is no stopping them. Wonderful write and WELCOME TO PASSIONS. I will look forward to reading more of your works.
Irish Rose
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11 posted 2001-03-08 08:26 AM


I may be a bit late but welcome!
yes, let the damn burst, flood us

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Corinne
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12 posted 2001-03-08 03:33 PM


Reddie!

This is very honest writing. So glad you are here! Another place to meet new friends, and these folks are very supportive and positive!


Corinnee

Cerenity
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13 posted 2001-03-09 09:46 AM


Hi Red-uni,

Wonderful entrance in to Passions and welcome, hope to be seeing more of your work, very much enjoyed this piece,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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