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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
I look Sometimes I might even see The self so hoped for trying to be I disavow regularly In purpose to what trying the only thing I can see in failed undertow And Yet too often said I am merely here One |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I look Sometimes I might even see The self so hoped for trying to be" wonderful  SEA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ATelamon - I found much meaning in your writing, and enjoyed it. BC |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You are a very gifted and talented writer.... |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I agree completely with the lady in white. The first stanza captured me. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
This likes me. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem |
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