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Finding Unwinding
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Finding Unwinding |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Finding Unwinding There shall be sereneness in my life some day to go from morn's light to dark of night softly to know that just one love holds me in his sway there shall be sereneness in my life some day there shall be a piece of peace in my life one day in the hand of one man who shall show the way to know that just one love holds me in his sway there shall be a piece of peace in my life one day I shall unwind my soul when I find my whole for there must be one who would not exact a toll to know that just one love holds me in his sway I shall unwind my soul when I find my whole there shall be a day to come and hair of gold is gray but eyes of love shall gaze at me all the night and day to know that just one love holds me in his sway there shall be a day to come and hair of gold is gray There shall be sereneness in my life some day there shall be a piece of peace in my life one day there shall be a day to come and hair of gold is gray and I will know just one love that holds me in his sway 01.13.01 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
someday for all of us my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
UGH~ so beautiful peaceful lovely  ~SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, sereness, peace, tranquillity? With me around, you have got to be kidding, we will be the only women over seventy who can still do the hula hoop, rollerblade, and juggle. Well I can juggle, I do it all the time me. Serene, and peacable, Oh yes, very quiet, not!! you'll be the speaker in the (What's your equivalent of the House of Commons?) well, that, and I'll be running the equal ops unit. (Everything in the House is a unit these days!) You don't need me to tell you this is a wonderful dreamy piece, QUIET, I think not dear heart!! Take care love, and watch out behind you Majestic not quiet Marsha  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Eloquentia perfecta. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes some day... loved and enjoyed reading this jewel. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kerilea, Quote the poet. There shall be sereneness in my life some day to go from morn's light to dark of night softly to know that just one love holds me in his sway there shall be sereneness in my life some day *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, well said...thank you for reading!... SEA, gotta love the UGH's...{~,^}... Marsha, for a moment I did forget who might read this, and I stand corrected...admonished...and have my tail between my legs... Poeminister...love it...thank you!... Charisma, a jewel?...thank you!... Sy...You shall hereforeafter be the Quothmaster...and I shall adore the quotes you quote of any poet...but I shall keep yours to me warm...thank you!... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...and I will know just one love that holds me in his sway" You know, Sunshine, sometimes I think about this very thing and I have to wonder if, just maybe, we aren't (or at least some of us) always meant to have "just one love". Maybe we're supposed to love as a whole, giving of ourselves to several, others, the love that so consumes us. Just maybe we were meant to share the powerful force that fills our soul with others that are less fortunate, and can't love the way we can. Maybe, in the end we do find that "one" love to finalize our days...maybe not. Maybe it's karma, if you believe in such a thing; maybe we, in past lives, were "loose" and not respectful of love, and are paying for it today, if truly we pay for past "mistakes" in our journey to "perfection". Maybe...and I could go on and on, as I'm sure all can, pondering the why's; gee, guess this piece struck a cord, huh??? Mucho enjoyed. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...James, I am thrilled at this passionate response of yours...so many things you've touched on...so many beliefs...so little time....no wonder so many of us believe in other planes and former lives... please...never hesitate to tell me how you really feel!...this, Sir...was wonderful! |
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