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Love's Start
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Love's Start |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks, Kathleen. You are a great editor!!  Today my heart found you And I’ve ceased feeling blue One look and I am falling For a braveheart has come calling I cannot resist your seductive charms Or the comfort I find in your arms I’ve never felt this safe before Thank you for opening my heart’s door You gave me hope deep inside Showing me that I no longer have to hide Your love breaks the walls of my past And I see a new future at last No longer does emptiness dwell For you have uncovered my shell You reveal the woman I am Bursting; exploding my dam I won’t contain my emotions I’ll surrender to all of your potions By placing my faith in your heart We will make a glorious start Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice thoughts this morning *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow nice work "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful work my friend...looking at your work brings me back to a place and time not so long ago when love like this seemed out of reach...I'm so happy that you've come to a place where you can weave the beauty of love again. Hugs to you!! "I wish the real world would just stop Hasseling me!" Real World MB20 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lone Wolf - a new beginning I see written into these words. A'hhh yes, must be a truly wonderful feeling. BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lone Wolf- It is wonderful to see you writing like this!! Beautiful words you have penned here...you have captured the beginning of a new love...very lovely my friend, very! Take care ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That's what love's all about. Well expressed! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wynter . . . Thank you so much. Glad to help brighten your day! Kathleen . . . Come on, you helped polish it.  Thank you, it is nice to write something new.BDC . . . Hey there!! Nice to see you again my dear friend. It's not out of reach sweets, it lives in our hearts. Hugs back!! Bill . . . The feeling is wonderful and life is all about new beginnings. Thanks! Amy . . . It is wonderful to write like this again. I did once upon a time, but that was long ago. There's plenty more where this came from! Take care of yourself. Thank you! walker . . . That is it exactly. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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