I walked away from heaven's gates..

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Open Poetry #12

I walked away from heaven's gates..

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-21 01:44 AM

I walked away from heaven’s gates
And flabbergasted Peter uttered:
“Why does one leave the soothing shades
Of Eden’s gardens?” and I muttered
“She isn’t here.” “How could you tell?
You’ve never went inside.” “I know it,
She isn’t here.” “Oh, go to hell!”
“Yes, I intend to, in a moment.”

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 2001-02-21 09:34 AM

Search to the depths of hell for the one we love. Very unique writing in the way you brought that out. I like this!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-02-21 09:41 AM

Hmmmm definitely different. Hopefully you won't have to go to hell searching for your heart's desire.

No happiness there!
Interesting poem, I must say.
Deb

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-02-21 07:52 PM

Yes!!!

The true depth of love. . . to go to the gates of Heaven and not enter. . .

excellent!!

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-02-21 09:43 PM

Now that's true love

Well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

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