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Golden Rule{ Rictameter }
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Golden Rule{ Rictameter } |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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Golden Rule  forgive erase offense trust God to vindicate free yourself and the offender treat others as you need to be treated make love your greatest endeavor be at peace with all men reap happiness be blessed Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Wow! This is a totally new form to me, so I have no idea whether it's correct or not, but it is fascinating and very nicely written! Think I'll keep this one. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is such a pleasure to read your works as you share such a diverse talent in not only your creations but in the formats that you present them in. Wonderful piece from you as always and of course the re-write of the message is beautiful. I applaud you!! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
It is a rictameter shape: initial line is 2 syllables, increase the number of syllables by 2 each line, i.e. 2 4 6 8 10, then 8 6 4 2. Marilyn, thanks for your sweet comments!!!! And Mark: you made me blush! Thanks for your graciousness to comment as you have. You just blessed my socks off! LOL I am very ill and am hindered in making very many posts or doing very much commenting when I do get to come here. (Long story ....but it's a lot of pain for me to sit for very long in the wheelchair....) Forgive me if I have not been here as much to read or post... I am fighting to get the muse to write!!! LOL  Thanks and God Bless you! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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