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When The Music Hurts
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When The Music Hurts |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
When The Music Hurts I'd like to thank the person who inspired me to write this poem from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for being here for me. It means so much to me. ~Laura~ Our song was This I Promise You, listen to it again…it describes you and I. I still have many tears left to cry, I cannot turn on the radio without thinking of you Being without you has left me sad and blue You are still in my thoughts everyday but I know that you have nothing more left to say You were my Angel, No Matter What Will I miss you everyday for the rest of my life? That question I don't have an answer to. Only time will tell when the music stops to hurt. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I really know the feelings that you're talking about here Laura. . . take care. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, Yes, and it hurts. Take Care of you too. ~Laura~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i really like this poem, Laura.. i liked the way the closing line adds so much impact and punch to to the rest of your poem... keep writing  |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Kaile, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will continue to write. Take Care, Laura |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This is really good. Miss her everyday...maybe but after a while it won't hurt so bad. Love the title! |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I hope I won't miss her everyday.....maybe someday the pain will fade. I love the title too! LOL Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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