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NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

0 posted 2001-02-20 05:49 PM

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with Yeti eyes
you beg to roam
desolate skins
of wintered dreams

warm fingers travel
snow-white thighs
as thirsty lips
sip melted streams

wrapped in your arms
my frozen form
begins to curl
as fevered breath

burns through the ice
of arctic fields
body revealed

and soaking wet

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-02-20 06:00 PM

fact or fiction? well, i'd hope for fact!!! this poem ROCKS!!...... it's hot!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-02-20 06:05 PM

Welcome, welcome! I agree with doreen. You and she will surely appreciate each other's poetry quite alot. I shall enjoy watching you two get acquainted!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 2001-02-20 06:05 PM

Welcome to Passions! I think we'd all wish for fact LOL...this is a

one!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-20 06:26 PM

I'm with doreen. . . excellent!!

Welcome. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

5 posted 2001-02-20 07:18 PM

doreen...thanks! Vas thinks we have much in common...heh-heh

Vas...thanks for the welcome, gonna check yours out now!

White dove...thank you...so glad you liked it

Sven...thanks for the welcome...appreciate your kind reply

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-02-20 07:26 PM

this is very hot........& welcome to passions.....helen

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

7 posted 2001-02-20 07:28 PM

thank you lady, i appreciate your taking time to read and comment

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

8 posted 2001-02-21 01:07 AM

Looks like the vote is unanimous for fact, and who am I to dissent? Welcome to Passions, and write on!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

9 posted 2001-02-21 11:37 AM

Write on!

WELCOME
TO
PASSIONS

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-02-21 11:51 AM

Welcome to the forum, this is very sensuous.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-02-21 12:08 PM

Love this. Welcome to Passions!
Look forward to reading more from you...

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-21-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-02-21 01:47 PM

NC, Welcome to Passions! An interesting first post, by all means! Check your e-mail for a special message!

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

13 posted 2001-02-21 04:31 PM

kcsgrandma, insect, kathleen, poeminister and sunshine...

i'd like to thank all of you, for such a warm welcome, and for taking time to read and comment

i appreciate the nice words
thank you again!

sunshine...yes, a very cool feature!
thanks for showing it to me, and for the card!

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