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Abstract dreams |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Abstract dreams there was no music in the room still two lovers danced to moon what had brought them where they are now, have they danced too high and far a heart, a mind, freed to explore waiting, searching, wanting to know more all steps that heart and soul take leave you hungry, with different ache but light of day cause eyes to react reality now found, dreams abstract oh, which is dream, which is real the sound of silence, truth concealed |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: sometimes it's hard to tell, isn't it? but to believe in dreams and seek them is a gift... it's just a matter of discernment and knowing if you're asleep or awake... or something... lol.... your poem was charming |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . are my dreams real?? or is my reality all a dream?? excellent helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes, I liked this with its questions. Many truths involved that tear the mind apart just pondering them. Sometimes maybe we shouldn't ponder so much, but receive things without question. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Perhaps the silence space between like notes implied the tale tells swaying silent rhythms surely envelope stars see burning their quiet unquenchable feat inspiring steps lighting the night ushering in the day that dark nor light can ever change a dream awakened heart "In the morning when you rise, do you open up your eyes, seeing what I see..." J Anderson |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
After reading this, i had to bump it....  jsom |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
hey,lady, how go the "travels"? been offline for awhile and still in that funk but had to answer this. if you haven't stumbled onto it, look for "dreams of truth". just for you. have been trying to send my best "hope things go well with you" vibes your way - hope some found you and found you well. kraw' |
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