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A Sense of Joy
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A Sense of Joy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Sense of Joy She sources me joy, a kind of Oasis for my thirsty mind. A resting place of peace and grace A new dimensions freedoms space. A rainbow colored bridge of hues An Eden butterfly in muse. A pendulum that sweeps in part The very essence of my art. It stirs the passing sands of time It adds its beauty to my rhyme. It offers drink a thirsty soul To reach an ending to his goal. The hand of youth in living strength A silver chord with endless length. A blessing in her kindly share A heart of gold beyond compare. Oh fleeting flower kiss me now This ancients sough, this ancient brow. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh what a lovely tenderly written love song...how wonderful of you to write what she means to you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A rainbow colored bridge of hues An Eden butterfly in muse. A pendulum that sweeps in part The very essence of my art. It stirs the passing sands of time It adds its beauty to my rhyme. It offers drink a thirsty soul To reach an ending to his goal. The hand of youth in living strength A silver chord with endless length. A blessing in her kindly share A heart of gold beyond compare. Oh fleeting flower kiss me now This ancients sough, this ancient brow. ======================= once again ... "oh my" ... this poem is Eden ...   seems to me ... you're sharing some rainbows and butterfly sighs around your self ... and trust me when I tell you sweet Sy ... your rhymes have always had beauty ... and since this poem is so very sweetly intended ... I will resist the temptation to fuss about the "ancient brow" line *S* we will write it off to poetic license ... and not a "senior moment"  *L**winkiewinkie* my treasured Stinky  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BRAVO....BRAVO.... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Seymour, so tenderly written, each line sings with pure emotion... such a blessing to be in love and to feel love in this way... Bob <>< |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Seymour, This is very, very nice. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I agree with all that JM says, this is lovely! Except...I am just too curious about 'sough'! Oh, I guess I could see what the dictionary says. Just a sec...oh, a moaning sound...so this is an 'old groan' ;o} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my dictionary says... "to make a moaning or sighing sound" .. Randy dragon moans....  Sy ... sighs ...then so do I *winkiewinkie* rofl  LOL  Love is my religion I believe in nothing else to find that inspiration live that inner vision love is my religion I believe in you. ~T Kimmel~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, It was easy to do in this cse, thank you. JM, Your winkiewinkie treasured stinky thanks you and bows to your allowance of poetic licence. Love ya. And bravo to you my Sunshine. *L* Light, Thank you much, Bob. Kathleen, Thank you for the very very. Vas, I sough on your lovely comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Our messages crossed. No need to sigh I'm the kissy your the kisser. WW S |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, Just lovely, your heart shines in this one, enjoyed so very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you my Cerenity butterfly. |
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