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Wishing You Love......(free-verse?)
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Wishing You Love......(free-verse?) |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I've cried, I've screemed, I've bit, I've clawed I've tried to take away all falls, heal the hurts Take away all pains and be the one that bled I've tried, I've cared, I've been, I've fled I've seen, I've taught, I've preached, I've led Take my heart, the feelings end, just turn to stone Your hurts have been many, this a very tough year Pain from all directions, big, medium and small I thought I had prepared you for what was to come Remember my words for the days yet to be When you start to feel happy after the pain It can be just as you hoped, but, snap of fingers, gone Be ready to feel love that is ready to be given As the days and time flow past, pray it remains It can change in the blink of an eye, forever gone The words are just perfect all you dreamed to hear Your feelings laid bare and soothing voice just right Pick up the pieces of miseries gone by in the other life A friend becomes more, the past begins to fade Your unprotected heart has been pierced with hope You forget how quickly the world becomes black Now you have cried and you have screemed And tried to lose the pain to face the future To live each day, forget the past, mend the bleeding heart Thank you JM for your kind words and help. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a lovely tribute, ME... Very nicely said..  |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you Nan, for your kind response. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you say a lot here, Mother...and do it very well..the style suits you.... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Yes, this is very good, Mother Earth...it does suit you....all I can say is keep writing them! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ME, It sounds like she deserves some peace and calm after the storm. Sending her my love . . . always. Sad, yet hopeful. Nice writing.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ME ... your very welcome....but I didnt do anything... this was all from your pen to tell someone you care for and worry about how you feel. that is one of the gifts of poetry... it gives us a voice for the things we sometimes cant say in person... your mothers intentions shine thru in your words.... well done MB As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Deer, thank you, it is scarry doing something different the first time. Nate,thank you so much. I will try again if I can remember where this one came from. Lone Wolf, I keep hoping everything will surprise me and get all better. Not sure I could live with that either! Janet Marie, you helped more than you will ever know. I like the "MB". Thank you |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mom* I know...and I love you for it...thank you doesn't say all I want to say...but I hope you know. Here's to brighter days..on the other side of the rainbow for once  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice piece, ME! thanks for sharing with us. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Butterflies, my kid, I am ready any time you are to go chase those rainbows!! We earned them, right? Always love. Hugs,Mom VAS, I am so glad you read and you like. Thanks |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful expression of caring... each verse says you're there for them, no matter what. *S* |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
A Mother's love, shall be "forever" in the hearts of the young. And pain recedes, when the knowledge is there that she will "always" be the strong arm to hold you up and the shoulder to lean upon and the voice of reasoning when the "forever" of dreams disappoints... Lovely words,ME Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
suthern, thank you for understanding, and it is caring......... no matter what. Lady Ollyne, what beautiful words you used to sooth this mother's heart. Many thanks |
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