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Asking too much?
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Asking too much? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Asking too much? Yes, I want to be in love and all the variables there of I want to boldly take that risk feeling things I have missed it's a different kind of ache one, that I could take lost helplessly in a bliss starting with your kiss love scenes in the night secrets told of delight three o'clock for me to wake moans that only lovers make someone to whom I turn with every wanting yearn wrapped around warm arms safe between these charms teaching all you know loving starts to flow a face that is rough I can never get enough someone to make me tremble heart beats disassemble a hand entwined in mine life to share and combine yes, I want to feel this touch is being in love asking too much? [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
it should not be. no. not too much. withstanding hand of loving touch... and no it should not ever be... a sacrifice of "you" to me... take me now as ever am... take me now and understand this is the last request you'll see. Take me. Tame the beast in me. with *winks* " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
NO IT'S NOT! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it depends on who you're asking. . .  wonderful helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
You ask only for life and light neither could desert even in deserts once lived There was and is a voice a hand both speaking silently yet screaming the sky answering your love is all and more new denies the old new a chance to hold new the breath shared new the story told new the living old the dream as you reawaken forming what ALL you have ever desired yet to this day a yesterday unknown breathe deep the moment as it marks the pathway loved given but until the now nver spoken sing loud your love The world hears your call and answers oh how it answers |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Helen, I can honestly say you have me in sighs upon reading your poem... Good writing sweetie.. ~coco~ [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ditto, me too.. bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, it is a risk - this is NOT asking too much! : ((hugs)) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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