I Love You (Acrostic Always)

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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

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Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-17 10:20 PM

I in my slender touch of knowledge

Longed to share each and every moment desiring
Ode worthy of the you that exists lighting all
Volumes to read insight more you bring all and
Everything sparkling life so given from afar adoring

You pleading with life to show give me more light
Of your bringing I reach touching giving All I am
Unsaid till now I Adore You and You Alone Evermore

"Shadows chase me always, no matter where or when I roam. One thing that they've taught me, not to go walking through this alone. But still I have to say once, that I thought it the other way. But too many times I forgive myself- never feels the same..."

KJH

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
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1 posted 2001-02-17 10:27 PM

a very lovely acrostic... the 3 words everyone wants to hear spoken from the heart, spelled out and expanded straight from your heart.... very nicely done...

what's the quote from at the end?

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-02-17 10:38 PM

Thank You for your kindness.

The words are merely truth. Yet how hard they were to write. Especially for all to see as the depths of the speaking exposes me complete.

The quote is from the last song of my album. It is entitled "Shadows."

Thank You.

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-18-2001).]

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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3 posted 2001-02-17 10:42 PM

Sadly beautiful sir....... sigh.....

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-02-17 10:53 PM

Do you have any idea how you move me?

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

5 posted 2001-02-18 07:28 PM

Again my thanks for your reading.

And is not so sad a thing. To feel the depths, even at a distance. One knows the real from any other. Time has a way of instructing one in the real and the imitation.

And no I do not know how I move any. I write as much from need, as from the love of paper meeting pen.

Thanks again.
AT aka KJH

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

6 posted 2001-02-19 04:26 PM

eyes closed
heart open
two connect
and breathe whole
once more

Home is always
where the heart is

Beautiful, powerful........I'm moved beyond tears.........

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-02-19 04:42 PM

KJH - I like your style...

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2001-02-19 05:09 PM

the master with a pen has spoken!!! another great one

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

from afar adoring
I reach.....touching.........giving......all I am.....I adore you..........and you alone.........evermore.

wonderful, helen

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