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Immaculate Conception
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Immaculate Conception My angel flew away. Seems she didn't really want to play. Sometimes I get kind of rough. I love to kiss and hug and all that sugary stuff. Perhaps she was an angel looking for an immaculate conception. Although she did like to kiss a lot. But she'd push me away if I got to hot and wasted no time slapping my face if I touched her where she said...not. Sometimes romance seems just like a religious experience. Takes you right up to heaven for a period of time then makes you wait until you die til true love you will find. Anyway I was thinking what if you die and go to heaven and kissings not allowed on those streets of gold up there and all these beautiful angels only offer you a handshake and tell you how heavenly nice that you could make it up those heavenly stairs. And you want to hug and kiss them and show them how much you care but they are so heavenly ascended and have only friendly conversation to share. Meanwhile back on planet earth yes I'm still alive and I kiss to live and I kiss to survive. I make a vow to kiss every angel that's alive. Leave it to me to miss no kissing opporunity. I promise to offer a kiss to each earthy and heavenly angel I shall see. Jameslee@February17,2001 Ihavekissedangels. Ishallkissmanymore. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes romance seems just like a religious experience. Takes you right up to heaven for a period of time then makes you wait until you die til true love you will find. Anyway I was thinking what if you die and go to heaven and kissings not allowed on those streets of gold up there ================= oh james....you sweet devil you...  love the title and theme of this ... SBJ is a kissing fool ... very cool poem poet sir. kiss away ... As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
**dusting off my wings** Great write James...you gave me a smile and a thought to ponder...Immaculate Conception... sounds like something that should be outlawed  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ok Im waiting....this kiss this kiss...I dont believe one is enough |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this....especially the concept James...very creative....brilliant write! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a great write James...I love the whole idea and the title caught me for sure....good stuff!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, Yes the title did grab me right off, and was loving the poetry as well, a man who loves to love, keep on loving those angles dear one day though one is going to take you right up to heaven and never let you go!!! Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Say Mike there is a cure for this kissing bug It's call a kissing slug. It comes in a bottle and some times a brand just about the size of a hand. Excellent write, I enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, James, James. . . there certainly is a lot of dusting going on around here. . . great poem!!! ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is just too cute! Truly impressive.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Ah, so JamesMichael is JamesLee? Still kissing the girls and making them sigh, I see. (o: This is sweet, James, glad I found it (and you!) Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i love this write..i love the way it reads..i love the concept... very cool hugs, g "...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton |
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