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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-02-17 09:35 PM



In the darkness for your hands
I search, but the moonlight,
one shadow makes. My tired eyes, keep
me awake, begging for your return.
My pillow dries all my tears.
The worse I always fear. You offered
a crumb of love and my heart swallowed
it whole. Foolishly I felt for you,
a stranger, in my sealed room. Easily you
gave yourself, easily you walked away.
In the darkness for your hands I search,
but the moonlight one shadow makes.

Sorry, for spoiling the shadows dancing in the moonlight!

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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1 posted 2001-02-17 10:13 PM


We need to see all sides of the spectrum, Walker....well done!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-02-17 10:22 PM


In the darkness for your hands
I search, but the moonlight,
one shadow makes. My tired eyes, keep
me awake, begging for your return.
My pillow dries all my tears.
The worse I always fear.
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In the darkness for your hands I search,
but the moonlight one shadow makes.
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trust me...you "spoiled nothing"
very cool write walker
the dove images and references added to its pleasures.


As sure as God made wine
you can't wrap your arms around a memory
In the dark for me
youre the candle flame that flickers to life
~Mission UK~

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