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SEA
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0 posted 2001-02-17 07:39 PM



The kids are in bed............
What shall it be
a movie, a game,
or a dance with me?

I see that twinkle
I know what's on your mind
as you guide me to the porch
touching my behind.............

Slowly you undress me..............


....................what will the neighbors think..................


....................what will they see.....................
Softly, you say to me.........



.........In the moonlight.................Shadows dancing...............


~SEA~



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Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-02-17 08:18 PM


SEA--Love this, very romantic and sensual...

Poeminister

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2 posted 2001-02-17 08:37 PM


Sea--So sweet is love in moonlight...and your poem.
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3 posted 2001-02-17 09:22 PM


Hmmm....very interesting twist on this challenge! Wonderfully romantic write, SEA!

sp


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-02-17 09:28 PM


Do you like a SEA smiley...
I made it in a graphics program I have.




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5 posted 2001-02-17 09:54 PM


I remember......{~,^}
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6 posted 2001-02-17 10:08 PM


Oh..I remember this one too!!! NICELY done... love it.
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7 posted 2001-02-17 10:27 PM


his hand is WHERE???
OOH..Im telling...LOL...
lucky moonlight...lucky neighbors
lucky Sea-gator
great write me girlie


As sure as God made wine
you can't wrap your arms around a memory
In the dark for me
youre the candle flame that flickers to life
~Mission UK~

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2001-02-18 10:09 AM


Sometimes you just can't worry about the neighbors and this would be one of them. Wonderful write and I am glad you reposted as I was not around in Open 5.
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9 posted 2001-02-19 09:49 AM


Hi Sea,

"Oh" girl don't worry about those neighbors, dance til dawn,,, you lucky little thing,,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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