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Mendy Junior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 34 |
For some reason this is not structured the way I tried to post it - I'm working on it. Can anyone tell me how to endent specific lines here please? Figment _______ Figment ………….swell ………….of heart Figment ………….drip ………….of tears Figment ………….calmness Figment ………….consistency Figment ………….What ………….it was Figment ………….What ………….we once knew Figment ………….of Faith Figment ………….or Hope Figment ………….or Love Truth ………….steel yourself ………….trust only you. if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru [This message has been edited by Mendy (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great message! sad it has to be but it's the way it is and I'm glad you wrote about it...touched on the subject in the nicest of ways! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes, a very good message! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Mendy--I like this. Nicely said. Poeminister |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mendy I find the format very creative...in answer to your email ...there aren't that many hard fast rules to this....I find it to be a good delivery...any advice you get is going to be the opinion of that person, if you like the advice then act on it...if not then the work is yours...take care and have a nice day!!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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