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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Part I walk upon an endless road The handrail made of silver thread Carrying an infinite load The railing anchored bed to bed. The view is mist in doubt and true In sweet and bittersweet its floor Only seldom the sun shines through For most is overgrown with awe. I do not know how long the climb Nor can I see the sunset door The sand wears through my soles of time But I will go until rapport. If not by me then future spore Passing umbilical thesis In rebirth of a better core To fill the common geneses. Ageless and timeless in anthesis And I, but a tiny part of this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh....wow....we're on the same wavelengths today.... you are awesome.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We are all but specks... but your speck sure does glimmer, Seymour! *S* Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I walk upon an endless road The handrail made of silver thread ==================== The view is mist in doubt and true In sweet and bittersweet its floor Only seldom the sun shines through For most is overgrown with awe. ===================== The sand wears through my soles of time But I will go until rapport. ===================== In rebirth of a better core To fill the common geneses. Ageless and timeless in anthesis And I, but a tiny part of this. ====================== not as tiny as you think ... you leave much more of an impression than you know ... as does your poetry ... and the things it teaches mere mortals like me *winkiewinkie* ps ... thank you for the new words you added to my vocabulary today  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"ageless and timeless" now those words I can really learn to love. Nice one, Seymour. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you for the read and WOW. *L* Suthern, Appreciate the well done. JM, You welcome Huggs and love ya. WW S Kathleen, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The view is mist in doubt and true In sweet and bittersweet its floor Only seldom the sun shines through For most is overgrown with awe. hmmmm I would criticize constructively, but you always construct your poems so well..so all I can do is say I enjoyed the read..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy* The message within this beauty cannot be measured by the head...but must be felt by the heart...thank you for sharing this awesome weave with all of us...we know you...and are better for it~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nkad, Had my doubts about that verse. Thanks for the read and comment. Butterfly, You I love. Vandana, Thanks for the like. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, "Ah" your gental wisdom flows beautifully in this piece and I gleam much from your words on these pages, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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