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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Write you breathe another sings one just whispers you walk one talks another goes a straight line we are one you climb I rhyme one by one nothing goes undone hello goodbye here we are by, and bye I gave you give we live you lie I strive one dies we live give it back give it on live as one to live, undone be one now comes sweet the trust take, if you must I will just give so I may rightly live now is the time to see the rhyme in what I write for I am right in what I say in the I love you this very day in the take of you loving me which I give back, you see…. for I will only give in what I write for it is how I live…. and someday someday I will write like Rod or Simon perhaps, Gibran… whatever, I shall go on…. I, Write 02.14.01 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
that you do, sunshine....and superbly. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sir....thank you.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
When (not 'if' but when) your poems are published - I think a fitting title would be "The Infinite Variety of Karilea" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's not just what we do.... it's what we are.... you write quite well, y'know? you write your heart and your wisdom, and that's what makes you a true Poet... this poem proves that... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, writing is a drive isn't it? This is superb.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart beautifully put. You are what you write. Utterly totally wonderful Love it as always Take care love Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karilea I love the creativeness of your work...it just keeps on coming and coming and I really enjoy it!! This is no exception and lady you sure do write!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats...what a lovely thought to share....thank you...let's keep that as an optional title, shall we?... doreen....from you, I humbly bow...thank you.... Irish you are SO right!...thank you... Marsha, thank Puck for the brevity!....thank you!... Ethome...you sure do gush! and I adore it....thank you! |
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