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ethome
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0 posted 2001-02-14 07:35 PM



with this old guitar in my hands
and insanity in my heart
I'm playing blue notes and chords sitting in the dark
baby you were lying and I feel like a fool
and I got a heavy fever left over from you

I put my trust in your promises
and you were hoping I would too
cause you knew I'd be waiting for them to come true
then along came old Santa sweet daddy claus
and gave you everything a woman would want

Baby this old guitar
don't settle no scores
but someday woman
he ain't gonna want you no more
and you're gonna cry girl
when he shuts up the door
and I'll be here healing
with these blue notes and chords

now these misty eyes are staring
at four walls and the door
and on this old guitar I'm playing blue notes and chords
and I can see you out driving your brand new car
while I sit here on the floor with scars on my heart

so when you see me baby don't ask me how I've been
cause you know I've been alone while you been with him
and girl don't say someday maybe we'll talk
cause you ain't no friend... the only friend I got
is this old guitar and these blue notes and chords
and for better or worse I don't need nothing more

with this old guitar in my hands
I'm gonna play right through the pain
right through the darkness right through the rain
til I can face the days with my spirit restored
with this old guitar and these blue notes and chords

© Copyright 2001 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-02-14 07:44 PM


Hey baby....got da blues myself...and was just complaining that I let my guitar get dusty again...and even worse? my fingernails grew back! LOL...love this one, someday we'll have a jam session!
walker
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2 posted 2001-02-14 07:50 PM


I'm no musician, but damn, this would make a good song! Great inspiration.!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 2001-02-14 08:07 PM



"then along came old Santa sweet daddy claus
and gave you everything a woman would want" ~~ great line


Diggin' your blues, ethome.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


ethome
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4 posted 2001-02-14 08:27 PM


Thanks Celeste them dere blues keep comin love!

Thank you Walker that's what it was meant to be.

Meadow thank you for the wonderful comments.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-02-14 09:09 PM


Ethome....no longer do I read responses to a poetic endeavor...I respond directly...

and to this piece, I say...perhaps...perhaps this is why God created music....

well done, my friend...

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6 posted 2001-02-15 10:53 AM


I like this a lot and simply love the ending... could you play another set for me since I lack the talent? *S*
ethome
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7 posted 2001-02-15 11:08 AM


Thanks Karilea...thank God God created music and the rhythum and flow.

Thanks Suthern I'll give it another whirl and I'll be lookin for ya ta smile! he he

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8 posted 2001-02-15 01:37 PM


with this old guitar in my hands
and insanity in my heart
I'm playing blue notes and chords sitting in the dark
baby you were lying and I feel like a fool
and I got a heavy fever left over from you
=====================
with this old guitar in my hands
I'm gonna play right through the pain
right through the darkness right through the rain
til I can face the days with my spirit restored
with this old guitar and these blue notes and chords
======================

you always strike the right chord in me
veeery cool E-babes...
you know I love your cadence...
and when ya sing the blues ya hit all the right notes ...
I can hear JL Hooker a wailng this one out..
or maybe BB.K


When you see thru loves illusion, theres the danger
your perfect lover looks like a perfect fool
you go running off in search of a perfect stranger

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-02-15 01:53 PM


ETHome~
Really enjoying the melody wrapped around this one -
It begs to be sung ... so I am.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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10 posted 2001-02-15 04:29 PM


Thanks very much my poet pet...I always love your replies they have a way of giving me a good shot in the heart...and I thank you so much for it.....you're VANtastic!

Hey Marge it's so good to hear from you...thanks for the kind comment it really inspires me coming from you!

OLIAS
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11 posted 2001-02-15 08:50 PM


"The blues aint nuthin but a good man feelin' bad about the woman he lost", and this is deep blues Ethome, I feel a detune and a slide bar coming on, wonderful work sir, thank you for posting.

Regards,
Olias.

catalinamoon
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12 posted 2001-02-15 08:58 PM


Yes, I can hear Elvis singing this now..
The blues, they have a way of hitting us around this time of year, don't they.
Beautiful.
Sandra


Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today.
— James Dean



ethome
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13 posted 2001-02-16 04:52 AM


Thanks Olais for the comments on the good old blues!

Catalinamoon I thank you for taking the time to read this piece I appreciate it and your blues comment!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

kcsgrandma
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14 posted 2001-02-16 11:31 PM


You do have a wonderful way with the blues. Do you attend any blues festivals? I know of at least one in NB.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ethome
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15 posted 2001-02-17 01:16 AM


Thank you Marilyn I'm glad you get to the Harvest Jazz and Blues Festival in my home town Fredericton...it's always a good time...ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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