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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-02-14 01:53 PM


Gone Forever

Laura M. Wells

Gone Forever, you are out of my life
because of the stupid needless, careless things i say
You have forever gone away
I realize now, i could not see.....the love standing in front of me.
I will miss you but will cry no more......my heart has turned to stone.
Please just turn around and walk away......i could not bear to see your face one other day.
What happened to us? Where did the love go? Now here i am again left out in the cold.
I know you probably hate me, but i don't hate you
I will always think of you and wish you the best in all you do.

For Amy.........I will always remember you. Take Care of yourself and good luck.

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-02-14 02:07 PM


When two share a "TRUE" love and have to walk away because of life or any other reason then there is never hate associated with it. Much hope and wishes for happiness for the both of you. Enjoyed the read.
walker
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since 2001-02-11
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2 posted 2001-02-14 02:15 PM


Love unfortunally "cuts both ways". One cannot love without suffering, and the one that loves the most is the one that suffers the most. Its not fair! Good Luck!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2001-02-14 02:29 PM


Mark-

i'm glad you enjoyed the poem......take care of yourself.

Walker-

you are right, love is not fair......especially when the one hurt the other person is truly sorry for what has happened......but life must move on.

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4 posted 2001-02-14 06:50 PM




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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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