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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
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0 posted 2001-01-13 12:05 PM


Today I clothed myself
in robe of flame colored silk
in which thou hast first glimpsed me,
and my yellow hair
has been wrapped upon my head,
so as to wear a crown
made from the reddist of roses
that thou hast handed me
upon that first occasion.

I wait for thee to obtain me
from the requirements of my father.
Do not deny him anything,
as thou wilt be lucky to escape
with thy life.

I shall return to my chamber this eve,
in hopes that thou shall
come back to me whole
and wilt have completed
the first of many tasks
set before thee, quickly dispersing,
then joining me, this moon laced night.

'Til that time
I am faithfully
Your Lady
Ollyne



"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-01-13 12:47 PM


Today I clothed myself
in robe of flame colored silk
in which thou hast first glimpsed me,
and my yellow hair
has been wrapped upon my head,
so as to wear a crown
made from the reddist of roses
that thou hast handed me
upon that first occasion.
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I have read all the posts in this series...
they are lovely.
wonderful in their imagery and romantic theme
well written and conceived, very cool vocabulary.
A belated Welcome to Passions from me..
I am catching up from a few days off with the flu...
so nice to have you here Lady O
take care
jm

No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ...
and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will.


maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2001-01-13 01:11 AM


great writing. i really enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

Sven
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3 posted 2001-01-13 07:47 PM


*bows*

*sigh*
Fair Poet, thou art indeed melting the heart of this Knight with thy tales of love and light. . . please Fair Lady, more words from thy pen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
4 posted 2001-01-14 12:29 PM


Lady Janet
  I, myself am  fighting the same bug,  
  making my meeting the eve past
  one of a feverish type...in more
  than one way. I am pleased you are  
  enjoying words from my quill and thank
  thee for thy sweet welcome.


   Sir Richard,
    A lady can only thank thee
    for the love and light
    sent her way by such a kind soul.

    Lady Ollyne



"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
5 posted 2001-01-14 12:35 PM



  Sir Sven,
   Thou delights this lady in replies of  
   such, that the heart of a Knight can melt
   by words that escape from mine pen  
   and placed for all to see...My tale
   is of a world unknown to most...but  
   shared within many a heart.

   Most humbly, I bow(curtsey)
   to thy wishes of more.

   Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-01-20 11:30 PM


Aye, wondrous reading, this...
Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
7 posted 2001-01-22 04:47 PM


Lady of Brightness,
  I thank thee for thy words
  that lighten my day...

   Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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