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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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I know you must go But give me your hand Must we keep serious Let’s fly to a tropical shore We’ll dance for an hour With the sandpipers Soar over the waves With the gulls And though my eyes Are liquid sincere I see the sadness of regret In yours I know the love Is buried there Piled high with commitment And once more I offer a rain check Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
true understanding....leads to many things....an offer of a rain check belies many promises....a most wonderful gift... well done Sir! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
were it only true - understanding were enough - Thanks Karilea - |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wonderful romantic write...ah, yes, rainchecks...  I enjoyed this!sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
ahhh - rainchecks - My parade has been showered so often - I print the checks in bulk - but my heart remains totally open |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Dont suppose you have one for me do ya? I like the thought |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It's raining here tonight............. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - SEA = I'll let you know the 'raindate' - could be interesting ~G~ - thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... swallowing the pain of disappointment and offering only understanding... I hope she appreciates the gift you've given. *S* |
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