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for the Candy Hearts Challenge |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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(this was not an easy task..no matter how i wrote it, it sounded choppy! but without adding any other words...heres my little 'sweetheart candies' ditty  ) for you only you i will be true ask me dear one i do love you for keeps i hope sweet love all mine let it be real love amore so fine  -dgvarner 2-12-01 "...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton [This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Not bad! You even got some rhyme in there! Good job. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Quite an accomplishment here...very well done!! I love it!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 A sweet treat your challenge response is... You did great DG so back2top you go again... ~coco~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MAR, SNOWPANTS, COCO..thanks a bunch! it was kind of fun..you try it!  hboy:, g |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Fallan Rain, I liked it, great job, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks CERENITY..  glad you enjoyed it..wish more people had tried the challenge.. , g |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oops...  sorry..truly i am...just for the record, i DID NOT intend to bump this by using my original name...my bad  ..i do apologize......it was late and i didnt even think to chng the username..... g |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, will love to try the challenge...directions please? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
precious *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good write I really enjoyed reading this! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think this is a great effort. I tried and all I came up with was a headache lol. Well done! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well you got a headache trying this one?? me too! but it was fun when it was done thanks for tryin anyway KAILE, the 'directions' are posted in the challenge forum..thats where you'll find all the words..i'll email you, in case you dont read this... thanks for wanting to try the challenge  WYNTER, & ETHOME..thanks for reading! glad you liked it  , g"...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton |
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