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Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-02-12 01:02 AM

If I could weave tomorrow
with the threads of yesterday
If somehow our song
could continually just play
We'd never reach an end
or a turn off in the road
Never topple over backwards
from a much too heavy load
Never have to say I'm sorry
for the words we can't take back
Never stare in horror
at our world painted black

But also, never have some depth
which brings a secret source of strength
Never push to go the distance
We might never reach the length
Never know security
for never knowing fear
Never find true joy
when our rainbow does appear

To capture and live a moment is truly living

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-12 05:02 AM

so very true..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-02-12 07:23 AM

yes you are so right, captured it very wel in these lines.

well done.

Charisma

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-02-12 07:33 AM

DreamKeeper~
Oh ... I LOVE this line~

'If I could weave tomorrow
with the threads of yesterday'

Just beautifully stated ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

4 posted 2001-02-12 08:20 AM

Thank you all so much for the kind compliments!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-02-12 07:02 PM

excellent dreamkeeper. . .

wonderful words. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-02-12 07:16 PM

I agree with Marge, the first two lines are very good.......I like the way the words wre weaved too...I feel your pain.....great piece!!

Nathan

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-02-12 08:28 PM

Well done!

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-02-12 09:30 PM

'If I could weave tomorrow
with the threads of yesterday
If somehow our song
could continually just play'

'Never know security
for never knowing fear
Never find true joy
when our rainbow does appear'

I am just loving this poem, dreamkeeper! Definite words of truth penned very well!!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

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