(any Ideas on a Title Plz)

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pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-02-11 03:08 AM

U make me happy and u make me sad
now sometimes this can be good and bad
In this case I don't know
not even someone can tell me so
What we have confusses me alot
whether the feeling is mutual or not
That's the part I can't figure out,
but tell me..what is our friendship really about?

Was it destiny for us to meet
or was it just because I friend I need
Alot of diffrent thoughts running through my mind,
some weird,nice,happy and sad..just about every kind
but what troubles me most of all now
is our friendship growing? in what way and how?

Will we ever be more than just friends
or will we have an everlasting love that never ends?
Who I ask can answer all my questions,
and what is your true intentions?
Words and actions differ in every way
and it gets more confussig every day

Is it your fault I fell in love with u?
and if it is I don't want to blame u, to be true,
U are everything I ever asked for
nothing about my past matters anymore
My life and love I want to share with u alone
To u and the rest I want to make it known.

U know what I feel for u,
Maybe someday u know my love is true,
Put me out of my confussion any time soon
hopefully I find out Friday after noon,
Then we shall meet again
no longer after that i shall be in vain

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2001-02-11 03:51 AM

'U are everything I ever asked for
nothing about my past matters anymore
My life and love I want to share with u alone
To u and the rest I want to make it known.'

This is a great poem, pix! I especially love these lines. Can't help ya with a title, though...I'm not too good at that m'self! Still, I enjoyed the poem!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

2 posted 2001-02-11 04:04 AM

thanks snow...this is a tough one to give a title for and i'm seriously stumped with this one...thanks once again for reading my work.

pix

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-02-16 08:03 AM

is our friendship growing?in what way and how?

i related to this line strongly...in fact, i ask tis question all the time...

sorry, i am not too good with titles myself...

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