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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-10 12:11 PM





You want fire?


You want the touch of loves heated desire
Firstly you must bathe within passions’ fire
The call of the stars as they shed their light
And the kiss of flames that heat the night
These will ignite the fire and call the flame
Summon the angels who play the love game

You want to dissolve in pools of liquid fire
Then feed the flames make them go higher
To touch the rainbow, sing the lovers’ song
Reach inside you to find where you belong
Stop looking with your eyes, try your heart
For ultimate joy this is the place to start

You want to see the flames stroke your skin
To understand the power of this it’s within
If you seek the heat then submit to my flame
And feel the answering fire driving you insane
Don’t chase after rainbows the heat is in me
For my incandescent flames are what you see

You want to feel the trail of fire that I ignite
To feel the surge of heat taking you into night
Do you want to ride in the wonder of an oh?
And feel these flames making your body glow
In me you will find all the fire you’ll ever need
I am the fiery answer and your hunger I’ll feed


Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
pixiechild
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1 posted 2001-02-10 12:23 PM


what a stunning poem. really liked it...it was kinda deep.


keep it up

pixie

Sven
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2 posted 2001-02-10 01:04 PM


wow. . .

um. . . somebody want to give me a glass of water???  and a fan??  and. . .

wow. . .  

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Beverley
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3 posted 2001-02-11 11:51 AM


Pixie, I don't know about deep, it was meant to be warm  
Thank you
Take care
                    Mushy
Sven dear heart, you want to rest? Or the rest?  
I'm good honestly, it's because it's cold here. Well, that's my excuse love and I'm sticking to it.
Thank you love
Take care as always love
                   Mushy
                      


And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fire

Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-02-11 12:14 PM


Marsha~
A little minx of a pyro-tech you are.
Now you go starting all these fires ~
you're gonna have to pay the fireman !  
LOL @ you !

Seriously ... (yes, I can be)
this is emotive emotion rushing to the page.
Keep it up !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-02-16 12:50 PM


MMMMMM feel the heat? What man in his right mind could resist the warmth of you
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-02-16 01:42 PM


You just keep getting better and better Ms. Marsha...I like this...of course I WOULD!!! lol...we are on the same wavelength this day. Nice work here!
Melody
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7 posted 2001-02-17 10:11 AM


Margie girl, what shall I pay them in, ahhh matches! Thank you love as always you've given me a big grin.
Take care love as always
Mushy

Paula dear heart, thank you as always, you are too kind, warm and friendly I would say that's fits you and me.
Take care love
Mushy

Serenity love, thank you as always
Take care love
Mushy


But love me for love's sake, that evermore
Thou mayst love on, through love's eternity
Elizabeth Barrett Browning

ethome
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8 posted 2001-02-17 10:15 AM


Hey there sweet nurse this is hot stuuf you're witing there....wow! I can imagine it coming from you, you are quite the open passionate lady...write on! Prinny!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

EagleOne
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9 posted 2001-02-18 04:03 AM


How could one not want such a fire!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

Kethry
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10 posted 2001-02-18 05:54 AM


Wow! Mushy,
what a you trying to do! It's hot enough over here without you fanning the flames. I aqin't never gonna get the smile offen my face if you keep wirting like this. I'm with Sven... water and a fan and also Ice! I need ice. ssssss Hot Stuff woman!
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Dear Heart
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Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right
11 posted 2001-02-19 05:47 PM





Reach out and touch someone
Holland Dozier and Holland

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