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pixiechild
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since 2001-02-02
Posts 35


0 posted 2001-02-10 11:40 AM


You felt like a sister to me
who helped me be
what I am today
a better person in every way
Remembering all the fun we had,
helping eachother through good and bad
You shared my teas and my joy,
listened to me moan about every boy

I feel hurt in my heart
that we are now so far apart
Why does it feel so wrong
to loose our friendship we had for so long
maybe cause I was to blind to see
what you really meant to me
Now I will regret
cause a friend like you is hard to get

I'm truelly sorry
if I made you worry
but for what it's worth to you
I would like our friendship to be true

And if there's no frendship anymore
oh well, guess it was a bore
think I can be lost
with our friendship at cost
Why is it so hard for you to accept
that who I am is what I am....
although, your friendship means alot
so in my heart it will be kept.
Ello again


not so sure if u want to know what the poem is about...but i'm going to tel u anyway. My friend and i had a fight over a choise i made and now we arn't friends anymore so i wrote her this poem and she said its a load of bull**** so i decided to brake the friendship....sometimes my poems doesn't make sence so thats why i tell u what its about


me

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Mother_Earth
Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-02-10 03:46 PM


At least you tried to get the friendship back on track.  I guess you can only go on for now.  A nice poem and with feeling.  
       Hugs, ME

Charisma
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since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
2 posted 2001-02-10 08:18 PM


heartfelt penned.....it hurt always to lose a friendship....and maybe she was hurt a lot too and need some time.....cause sometimes space is needed after a fight, and it was good to send you her poem..so she knows how you are feeling....hope the best for you

Take care

Charisma

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2001-02-10 09:43 PM


our choices are what make us what we are, who we are..but i feel that if your friend was truly a good friend, she could not shun you so completely because of a choice you made..

life is difficult, we must choose wisely..  

, g


"...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton

pixiechild
Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35

4 posted 2001-02-11 03:17 AM


thanks for reading my work ppl. i'ts appreciated  

pix

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