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Cupid Missed (secret valentine challenge #1)
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Cupid Missed (secret valentine challenge #1) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"who WAS that???" was the question asked, when I first heard his voice... I told my heart, "hush, now. Be still..." as if my heart had a choice. How could my heart cease its beating in face of such a sight--though fleeting? Instead it marched to double-time at just the thought his eyes meet mine... His eyes? (His eyes...) beyond describe- Chianti, smoke, exquisite rhyme... ability to stop all time, and in them I would gladly die. Does he know? Of course he does. Does he care? I know not of what discourse runs in his mind or if he thinks of me in kind. I don't believe I'm on his list. Once again...cupid missed. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
perhaps you need to give him a bigger target. . .  love this one my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when I first heard his voice... I told my heart, "hush, now. Be still..." as if my heart had a choice. How could my heart cease its beating in face of such a sight--though fleeting? Instead it marched to double-time at just the thought his eyes meet mine... His eyes? (His eyes...) beyond describe- Chianti, smoke, exquisite rhyme... ability to stop all time, and in them I would gladly die. ========================= I don't believe I'm on his list. Once again...cupid missed ========================= *sigh*(of resign) ... me thinks cupid needs glasses ... after all baby... ya know ... love IS blind and remember me twin ... its hard to see after staring at the pretty blue flame of a candle dance.. *winkiewinkie* *S* love ya me twin me Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well...have to say I was lucky once...and cupid connected our eyes and he felt the same...you described it perfect.....just love this....course it was star crossed, and not meant to be...so maybe that cupid isn't all he's cracked up to be  hugsgreat write |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
So sad to be not listed in the eyes of those we adore sad songs all |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If he says you're not on his list he doesn't know what a treasure he's missed!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....love all these lines, and the imagery you showed us.... enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahh yes, do I ever relate - "I don't believe I'm on his list, once again...cupid missed" Well penned, cupid doesn't know what he is missing!  Take care, Melissa~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sometimes cupid's stupid.... and not only that, who is this guy, santa claus? he's got a LIST? LOL.... forget his list. give him a new one. one name only. *g as always, enjoyed your writing, harpo |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I think Cupid needs new arrows... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wow!!! all these secret valentine challenges are making me sad  maybe cupid's cross eyed and misses all the time  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven...big sighs...think I'm just gonna give up. It all just gets to be a bit much sometimes...gonna go hide this Wednesday. and? I suppose it's only fair...I've been known to duck a few arrows myself. JM...you are so good for my ego and who knows? shrug, if it were easy? would be boring!jellybeans...wish I could just say "oh. it's luck...but it feels more personal than that. Like it's all MY fault. But I know YOU know. Thank you! Sharon...smiling here...could ya type that a little LOUDER? LOL AT...touching my spirit again...you cheer me up. I want you to know that. So thank you! Charisma? You are the sweetest poet. And hard working too, I thank you! Melissa? If I point him out? Will ya hold him down for me? I'll shoot the damned arrow myself if necessary...rofl..thanks lady! doreen...yeah, I think he's Santa Claus...and about as real, I suppose. But thanks for your continued friendship. love, harpo Paula...Okay...you help melissa hold him down? and to hell with the bow...I'll use my bare hands...ROFL...THANKS LUV! acire...thank you much for reading...and don't be sad. That's my job. HUGS TO FORUM. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well, these poems remind me that cupid missed me too I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
This is one for my library Karen, If cupid keeps missing maybe we should put in for some glasses for his eyes might need adjusting.  Rich |
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