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Sun Strung Senryus
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Sun Strung Senryus |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 in soft of night's light lips meet in tenderest touch one loves one that much swift morn with sunlight dancing on one’s shoulder now sunbeams laughing song night meets morn again soft sunlight pledges love then greetings, midnight, come eventide brings forth hidden thoughts kept from day's sun of love, of just, one… soft, the sun swift, sets orange blazing red blazing fire sets forth all desire 02.09.01 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
eventide brings forth hidden thoughts kept from day's sun of love, of just, one… soft, the sun swift, sets orange blazing red blazing fire sets forth all desire ========================== oh yes.... the sun ... in you ... does GREAT things inspire ... you muse ... sister sun ... sets your poetic pen on fire  Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Very gentle, soft, soothing. I love the way your poetry sends reflections of love. Just beautiful.  To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
May I pledge my humble awe in this? Perfection. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
kari dear heart, utterly truly wonderful, oh how I wish I could do this with even a scrap of your talent. Utterly fabulous absolutely excellent work And since less is more I'll only say this is perfect Take care love as always Puck Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Nice senryus and nice picture. Makes me miss the midnight sun. -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine, You write with such softness in these Senryu, very lovely thoughts and images woven into word. Nicely done. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my I have read these senryu's several times to inhale the beauty within and the picture is awesome.... wonderful....fabulous romantic piece. love it Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Beauiful images ~Maria~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This senryu poem is just wonderful, so well penned! You really have the talent for these! Take care, Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love the feel of every stanza. Nice stuff!! Especially in the midst of the winter wonderland we were given in the night.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I want to thank you all for enjoying this one with me.... |
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