Loving Fool........PdV's Challenge

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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-02-09 09:05 AM

I deleted this poem earlier, but upon Marge advise I will repost it again.
thank you Marge for giving back my smile and a bit of my self-confidence,
love you for doing that.

Loving fool

When your words of art
Caress my sensitive heart
Showing your romantic sight
While flames of fiery light
Tortures my precious soul
Yes I am a loving fool

You weave your web with words
These colors of love make it worth
The shivering when your name appear
While you build your rainbow here
And makes me a yearning soul
Yes I am a loving fool

Your love for natural bliss
Shows inside a silky kiss
From loving thoughts of mind
That makes my love so blind
And desire fills my soul
Yes I am a loving fool

Oh how I wishes that your love
Would be a gift from lover's dove
You'll never know how I adore you
And longing for your loving hue
While secret love rules my soul
Yes I know, I'm a loving fool

Charisma
08/02/01

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-02-09 09:41 AM

beautiful and passionate response to the challenge Charisma ..
lovely sincere sentiments ...
very well done!!

Heaven bound on wings of love,
there's so much that you can rise above.
I surrender heart and soul,
sacrificed to a higher goal.
~DepechMode~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2001-02-09 09:48 AM

Charisma, this is utterly delightful, so passionate, so wonderful, utterly utterly fabulous. I love this and so will the secret valentine.
Perfect
Take care love as always
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-02-09 10:26 AM

Charisma,
Very sweet a delight to read.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-02-09 10:34 AM

Charisma~
Oh ... what a beauty you've penned, my sweet friend.

Now ... that's the spirit !

That little prissy heart graphic is soooooooo adorable.

Fly onward and upward sweet, sweet poet.
You've displayed such a loving heart to us all.
*Hearthugs*

Psst ... throw that 'other' one away !
I love you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-02-09 04:51 PM

Janet Marie: thank you for your kind response....

Marsha: thank you for the utterly, I am glad that you liked it my friend.

Semour: and you too my friend, thank you for your delight comment.

Marge: and you are very adorable in your comments and your gift to make people smiling....thanks and I will do take your advise my dear friend.

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