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“Mirrors of my Heart”
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“Mirrors of my Heart” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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May you have no doubt… My heart belonged to you right from the start… You’ll never be locked out… Of my life you’re such a special part… When I say I love you, believe each word is truly how I feel… My thoughts are only mirrors of my heart, and what you see is very real… With every passing day… I’ve grown to love you more than life allows… And there is not a way… The two of us can keep what love endows… Still…the bond is strong… Your inspiration guides my pen in hand… I touch you with my thoughts in hopes you’ll see, and maybe then you’ll understand… Years flow swiftly by… And all life has a time in which to live… No matter how we try… The gift of time is one thing we can’t give… You and I belong… We’ve been together many lives before… Please take some time to look into this heart… The mirrors there will show you more…  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful, laced with a quiet strength and peacefulness. I truly enjoyed this!  To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello dreamkeeper... Thank you for joining me here, and I'm glad that you felt the peacefulness......I do appreciate your reply!  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With every passing day… I’ve grown to love you more than life allows… And there is not a way… The two of us can keep what love endows… Still…the bond is strong… Your inspiration guides my pen in hand… I touch you with my thoughts in hopes you’ll see, and maybe then you’ll understand… =============== beautiful sincere sentiments ... a lovely promise of devotion well expressed emotions Sunny. well done. Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, JM........I'm glad to have you reply, and know that you enjoyed this one!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Beautiful,spiritual,thanks for sharing this.. ~ live and let live ~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this Sunny..and the graphic is so romantic and pretty...enjoyed.. HUGS.. ~V~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi me twin...this is very powerful...the idea of being together thru many lifetimes is intriguing |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Your words are sincere and I could feel a tug at the heart strings. Just beautiful! Ariana |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ This one is simply stunning ! 'We’ve been together many lives before…' Yes ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
fabulous write.....enjoyed the imagery inhere very much....and the pic is also a beauty ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This was just beautiful and the graphic was a perfect touch. I just love "my thoughts are only mirrors of my heart," very clever and so true for many of us! *sighs* This gives me hope again Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
bbent..... I thank you, and am really glad that you stopped in to read this one!! ~~ V ~~ Ah, yes......you are drawn to graphics as I am, my friend......consider this yours!! Paula, my twin.... It's a belief of mine that souls are joined together for eternity in love, real love, from one lifetime into the next. Good to see you liked this!! Ariana... Thank you, my friend.....I guess my beliefs show through in this one......it's hard to seperate some ideas from one's writing sometimes! Marge... Oh.....you sound as though you have a similar feeling about the eternal love that grows between two people. Thank you!! Charisma.... I thank you for your always wonderful replies...I have come to look forward to seeing them!! Melissa... If one or a few of my words here give you hope in the love that we are all meant to have, I am most grateful. Those mirrors are in each of us, reflecting outward, and at the same time, they reflect the love of others into our hearts........don't hide them away!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very sincere and convincing piece. Very lovely showing of your heart and put together with much grace. Loved it. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The last two lines make me think of how many of us wish that our for love for another can be reflected and projected back to us. Beautiful, romantic and touching! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark... Much feeling went into this one, and I am glad that it is obvious to those who read it! Thank you, big brother!! walker... You are very perceptive, my new friend!! That is exactly the meaning in the last lines...I have always thought that the love we give is what we would hope to come back to us. Love reflections......thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'With every passing day… I’ve grown to love you more than life allows… And there is not a way… The two of us can keep what love endows… Still…the bond is strong… Your inspiration guides my pen in hand… I touch you with my thoughts in hopes you’ll see, and maybe then you’ll understand…' Ahhh, how I love these lines! Beautiful poem, Sunny! This is definitely something I'd dedicate to the one I love! Thank you for sharing this! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just lovely to read and dwell on.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - well done, as I have said so many times before about your beautiful poetry. I wish you the best. BC |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Beautiful words, beautiful graphics....well done! |
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