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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-02-08 09:00 AM




Horizon's Glee


Over the mountains
behind the horizons glee
is freedom waiting
while sound of silence surround
peaceable echo's of heart

Charisma




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1 posted 2001-02-08 09:36 AM


Captivating....takes me places....thank you!
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2 posted 2001-02-08 11:52 AM



Wonderful!  I love the last two lines  

Take care,
Melissa~

ethome
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3 posted 2001-02-08 11:54 AM


Hey this is great and I do so love the pic too!  You're very good at this style of writing!

Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination!

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4 posted 2001-02-08 07:37 PM


Charisma~
Absolutely beautiful !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-02-08 10:27 PM


Such a lovely view from here.  Love it!

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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6 posted 2001-02-09 04:37 PM


Karilea: it's me that must say thank you my friend.... for your support and friendship

Melissa: so glad that you loved it.

ethome: thank you for your kind response my friend...glad that you enjoyed it.

Marge: very happy that you liked it my dear friend...

poeminister: glad to share with you these lovely view....glad you loved it.

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