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Lunasong/Song of Longing (for esbat)
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Lunasong/Song of Longing (for esbat) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Aspect now of moon in full Rise of tide my womb in pull-- serenity draws down the moon... and so this be my gift to you. A candle, crafted specially, oils and herb, most savory, part of you and part of me... Tonight, I incantate, "undo..." No more pain leak from my pen of seed once planted, left, untend, no tears of ink to write of friend... leaving stain of neverend. Every word I wrote, undo, and seal with waxen tears of truth. ------------------------------ Song of Longing... Your thoughts meet mine like quartered rhyme. (If I could dance, I'd dance for you...) Wish you could play piano, so I could sing the blues. Wish I could take my pen-- re-write the truth untrue. Wish I could light a candle, and incantate "Undo..." If I could summon angels, I'd send every one to you. If you would play piano, I'd have no need of blues. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you serenity. . . for the moon. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Seren~ The title drew me in and I'm glad it did hon for as usual I was not disappointed...great write ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are splendiforus!!! A splendiforous serenity........ loved this one. It sings! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
light a candle for me baby ... tho me thinks some things ache from places deep ... may need an moth exorcist  anybody ever tell ya yer lovely in the moonlight ... awesome writing me twin ... your so cool it starts fires  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
This one speaks like a beautiful incantation. Wonderful write Serene Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Very nicely done - both of them ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge? I thought of you, when I saw Her rise...I knew my moon mom would be around! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, These are lovely, you have talent friend, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"No more pain leak from my pen of seed once planted, left, untend, no tears of ink to write of friend... leaving stain of neverend" great lines here, serenity... but why are you writing to a bat? LOL |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ You rock.........this is amazing! -SEA |
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