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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-07 02:15 PM

Listen the
  overture begins
    vapor like rising
      enticing musical mist

Swirls surrounds rolling
  over all embracing changing
    nights fear silence turned to
      glowing white melody lighting all

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-07-2001).]

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-02-07 02:18 PM

Beautiful acrostic. Capitally done.

Poeminister

"The soul can split the sky in two,
And let the face of God shine through."
~Millay

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-02-07 02:18 PM

Very well done! Wonderful musical feel to it! ethome

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-02-07 02:20 PM

This reads like a song, a lovely acrostic!

Take care,
Melissa~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-02-07 03:43 PM

I've only recently tried an Acoustic, I love the form--what a challenge, you did a nice job on this one!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2001-02-07 05:46 PM

this is great......I enjoyed it.....helen

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

6 posted 2001-02-07 09:53 PM

sounds a bit like going from unplugged to hard wired
heh

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-02-09 08:40 PM

Love is in the air with your lovely acrostic

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2001-02-09 09:16 PM

You just missed our Acrostic Workshop last month... I like this one, ATelamon... It's beautifully done..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

9 posted 2001-02-10 12:24 PM

My thanks for your kind comments. They are highly appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.

AT

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