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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2001-02-07 09:41 AM



Pippers pack the poet place
Producing pride and printed praise
Posting poems of passion’s prize
Perfecting poet’s paradise

Prolific pippers proudly parade
Plentiful posts on passion’s page
Presuming pen permits a pose
Of pipping poetry or prose

Posted poems profusely race
From page to page at panther’s pace
Pretty poems proudly penned
Pass pleasantly to forums end

Pipping prods a poet’s pain
From pen to puttering pouring plain
For poets prefer to publicly prance
In pitiful pools of post romance

Prompting pity and poet prayers
From passionate people, pipping players
Pondering the poet’s plight
Poignant, pleasant and polite

Pippers prophetically propose
Poetry replacing prose
Placing Poe on pedestal
With predator and pits appall

Personally I prefer the prime
The perfect poem , a paradigm
Pentameter precisely placed
A pendulum concisely paced

Quipper, pipper, pipster, Poe,
Pipping poems, a poetry pro
Perceptively I proudly boast
I’m just too sexy for this post

Liz


© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-07 09:46 AM


LOL...PERFECT!

What an Ending!

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2 posted 2001-02-07 09:50 AM


never seen so many p's lolol......great post  
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-02-07 09:50 AM


A pleasing palette.!~!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



ethome
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4 posted 2001-02-07 10:45 AM


He he that's just so delightful Elizabeth I really like it!  You can never be too sexy for the post....I hope the you can still see the p letter on the key.....I loved it! Keep up the good work your writing is so enjoyable!    ethome
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2001-02-07 11:19 AM


What can I say,
This is what happens when you run out of material
Thank you, pippers, for your indulgence
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-02-07 11:56 AM


Elizabeth,
Wonderful writing enjoyed the read very much.
Love Sy

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7 posted 2001-02-07 05:30 PM


Is your pinkie plum pooped? LOL This is great, Elizabeth... and I do love the ending! *G*
doreen peri
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8 posted 2001-02-07 06:24 PM


whatever provoked you to pen such perfectly precious alliteration which annunciates all alone from the tongue, so tremendously terrific!?!?  please please pen some more prolific and passionate pieces with provide pleasure to the peruser!

:P hehe..... (could you tell i liked it? *g)

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9 posted 2001-02-07 06:30 PM


Um. . . can I just say that I liked it??  

LOL  

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10 posted 2001-02-07 06:43 PM




Pleasingly perfect poem!

laryalee
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11 posted 2001-02-07 08:45 PM


Elizabeth, this is totally delightful!  Something popped to mind..."You're a pipper, I'm a pipper..." but I can't remember how it goes (old Dr. Pepper commercial) ...
Anyway, it's fun being a pipper, and being a passionate pipper even better!
Thanks for this gem!
Lary

doreen peri
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12 posted 2001-02-07 08:57 PM


"wouldn'tja like to be a pipper, too?"

*g... commercially speaking....  

Honeybee
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13 posted 2001-02-07 09:16 PM



Hehe, very clever!  What a mouthful!

Take care,
Melissa~

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14 posted 2001-02-07 11:01 PM


PLizabeth~
Pfuny !  Pfuny !  Pfuny !

Poet plants p's
Poet picks p's pleasantly
Please passionate poet,
Paint ponderous paper p's

Poof !
~*Parge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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15 posted 2001-02-08 12:47 PM


This is delightful, Elizabeth!! How do you do it? I didn't know there were so many 'p' words in the dictionary!! Quite clever!!
lucky
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16 posted 2001-02-08 01:43 AM


Liz,

I'm not supposed to laugh... Doctors orders, I could hurt myself before the 14th. Have you tried to read this aloud to anyone... it's the pips... LOL

love, dale

kitkat
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17 posted 2001-02-08 06:17 AM


This was great   Man so many P's. Love it.
Nan
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18 posted 2001-02-08 05:23 PM


Too PiPping Sexy... For sure...
Cerenity
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19 posted 2001-02-09 06:49 PM


Hi Liz,

Perfectly penned as always, loved it girl.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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20 posted 2001-02-09 06:54 PM


Now you try say that one quickly
Loved it.


~Maria~


Dr.Moose1
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21 posted 2001-02-11 10:37 AM


              POOF !
And here it comes 'round again .Wonderful piece from Potstown Pa. Thanks Liz!
Doc

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22 posted 2001-02-11 11:25 AM


oh my.....what an end.....hehehe.....loved it

Charisma

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