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ATelamon
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0 posted 2001-02-06 02:27 PM


a telamon alone
  stands

yearning eyes
  overlooks a dream
    upright strength
      
rarest stone
  ever standing he
    alone now
      caryatids none
        home razed

avanchaled debris
  broken temple pieces
    over run with ages
      vagaries he waits
        endures all standing

        






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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-06 02:34 PM


A most interesting entrance into your new Home!  Welcome!  I hope you take time to look around, read, comment, and post more interesting pieces such as this!  If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact a moderator.  And check your e-mail for a special greeting!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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2 posted 2001-02-06 02:49 PM


Very interesting, indeed.  You paint quite a picture - welcome to Passions.  
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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3 posted 2001-02-06 05:57 PM


Welcome!
Excellent entrance piece.
Looking forward to more of your work.

Celeste
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4 posted 2001-02-06 06:18 PM


Welcome!  

I read this several times and really enjoyed it because I had to pause and reflect through it.   I even had to search the dictionary once or twice.  
I do believe, though, that in the end I got it.  Will look forward to reading more from you.  

To capture and live a moment is truly living


ATelamon
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5 posted 2001-02-07 08:38 AM


My thanks for the kind greetings and comments.

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