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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-02-05 10:56 PM


" Peaceful Be "

Close your eyes peaceful be
As cleared mind, drift to sleep
Darkness overcome your lone
As away your thoughts move from their home
Body relax , untight be
As muscles let go untied free
Heaviness from limbs remove
As self in rest yourself you choose
Open your heart inflood love
Dream good thoughts down above
Feel your beating pulse relieve
Float with your soul in your self believe
See visions unreal, subconscious alive
Amaze your mind, as your spirit flies
Soaring above your lifely form
Looking down await inflood dawn
Awake now remember , forget
The dreams shared within no regret
Move through the day happiness glow
until in night your eyes you close

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Local Rebel
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1 posted 2001-02-05 11:02 PM


Now thats a smooth shot of Whiskey...

a few more like that and you'll definitely be disturbing the peace

Gothkitty
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2 posted 2001-02-05 11:07 PM


Very nice descriptive piece, i enjoyed reading it very much, and I must say what a beauty you are  

gk

Martie
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3 posted 2001-02-06 12:26 PM


hi Whiskey...nice to see you posting again...I loved this one...now tell me, how do you get to this peaceful place?  
Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-02-06 01:03 AM


Beautiful write. Very relaxing words.  A pleasure to read.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-02-06 02:50 AM


WhiskeyGal~
So good to see you home again.
Delightful thoughts in this piece.
~*Marge*~



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Kethry
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6 posted 2001-02-06 06:53 AM


Whiskey,
soft and sweet. Almost hypnotic.
write on
Kethry


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7 posted 2001-02-06 09:23 AM


(sigh) What a soft and sweet poem filled with serenity and love. What a wonderful place to come and visit, in which you've taken us through your wonderful words! You have such a beautiful heart, Whiskey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2001-02-06 01:02 PM


I loved the way this flowed Whiskey....a remarkable write!

Nathan

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9 posted 2001-02-06 01:19 PM


wow. . .

I really like this one. . .  

welcome back btw. . . good to see you again. . .  

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