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Hearts Sigh (Margie girl a shape, so now can I rest?)
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Hearts Sigh (Margie girl a shape, so now can I rest?) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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 Hearts Sigh Moans of delight Take me on in to the night Floating on the back of heat Feel the pulse of my heartbeat Racing with the wind I fly Oh this is magic I sigh Dance in this desire Touches taste fire Feeling so free You and me We fly High Just you and me Feeling so free As it should be Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and what a shape it is!! LOL  this is just wonderful love. . .it's perfect. . . it's hard to make that heart shape and you've done wonderfully with it!! ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mushie ~*~ Marsha Girl this is just the best now the new moon is on the rising of the fullest crest Next it is your due task to grab it so that we may bask in the glow of your pen *Wonderful job you did, my friend. You are just the bestest challenge taker ! Love ya' LOADS AND LOADS ! *Smiling* here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, challenge well met. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Excellent poem! Oh, I love that shape, it is perfect! (sigh) So sweet! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, she IS, isn't she! You keep throwing those challenges at her, she's a wonderful glove-picker-upper! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully done. Not only did you capture the feeling but you put it into a wonderful shape poem and those are my favorites. Marge taught me as well though I am not sure all of mine were a success. Great poem in both shape and message. |
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