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Guilty of Love
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Guilty of Love |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Guilty of Love You told me that I crossed the line while your eyes penetrated mine I asked you what I've done wrong Don't understand what's going on So you named it all one by one saying: this is what you've done, You didn't gave me any change when you guide me into a dance Than you wove with magic threads sweet seduction within my needs tingly feelings torture my veins losing breath with yearning sighs At that moment you took away with a graceful enchanting sway my very own precious part yes...you stole my beating heart So don't you dare tell me lies look at me now straight in the eyes and tell me are you really guilty dear about these feelings that appear And I....I was perplexed what could I do all these blames were so very true with innocent eyes I said:" Honey, I agree, I am guilty of love in the first degree. Charisma with thanks to my poetsista Shawana who challenged me to write a poem with the line "guilty of love in the first degree" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
You're outshining yourself as usual...;-) Well done poetsistah!! Lovely Valentine's poem.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma and you are guilty of writing outstanding poetry! Charismatic write, full of emotion! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
that scoundrel!! .... damn!... i hate it when that happens.... men who steal women's hearts and then? they ADMIT it! geesh... *g seriously, though, this had some anger and true emotion behind it... a powerful piece written straight from the heart.... and i really DO hate it when that happens..... *sigh*..... write it out, girl... that's what i do and it helps |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with Kethry, you're very guilty of writing an awesome poem, Charisma....keep writing and keep shining! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent my friend. . . I love this one!!  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it charisma...i didnt know you lived in the netherlands..but i do now ha..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ I'll have to hand it to ya' ... ALRIGHT ! Caught a glimpse of a giggle in this one, I did ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
shawana: thank you sistah.... I loved to do these challenge. Kethry: oh my....double quilty now.... thank you for your comment Doreen: you know it girly.......so be aware for the quilty feelings....before you know you are involved within. thanks for your great comment. Nate dog: oh my.....*innocent eyes plea for not quilty* thanks for your lovely comment Sven: I'm glad that you love it my friend. Victoria: now you know where I live.....and so glad that you loved it too. Marge: yes you have seen that right.....it was such a fun writing these one....do you think that I could pass the challenge through?? mmm...I like that idea.... :: [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Surely this is only a misdemeanor? I suggest you should be sentenced to writing more fine poetry!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
kcsgrandma: thank you for reading and your lovely comment. |
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