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Agent696_DS
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since 2001-01-31
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0 posted 2001-02-05 11:38 AM


Random Thoughts


Thinking about you throughout the day,
Wondering what will follow…
Happiness?
Not today, maybe another day.
We were close,
Now distant like galaxies star.
Our life is twinkling in the distance.
Wondering will it go away…
Sadness?
Feeling this all day,
Tears running down, filling the vast well…
Supporting each other still.
Anger?
Hurting each other,
Hot ash spewing from the mouth…
The hurt burns deeper than molten rock.
Love?
Not for some time,
The Love we both feel it,
Will it be enough when the end comes.

Written By Agent696_DS

© Copyright 2001 Jerome J. Plaza V - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-02-05 07:55 PM


Agent696_DS~
Welcome to Passions.
I like the idea of random thoughts ...
I try to have them each day !  

Interesting thoughts from you.
Hope you will share more with us.
~*Marge*~



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Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-02-05 08:15 PM


I agree with Marge...a nice collection of random thoughts...wonderful piece!

Nathan

JLR
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3 posted 2001-02-05 08:24 PM


Love the title!!!!!  But I think I agree----love will not win out.  So sorry.
Charisma
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4 posted 2001-02-10 07:43 AM


enjoyed the random thoughts.

wonderful penned.

Charisma

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