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Sven
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0 posted 2001-02-12 06:27 PM


*for Aimster*

the time has come once again quiet heart
to gather in your heart and hold it close to you
it offered its gift of love
     asking nothing in return
          and received back to itself
               a love for a lifetime

but now quiet heart, you hold in your hands once again
the candle of your inspiration
its flame having been blown out by the winds of time
and now, you walk the streets of experience
lost,
     and looking for one who can hold it again with you

go now gently quiet heart
seek the flame that will guide you
     on your way
the flame that will warm your
     coldest nights
but be not surprised quiet heart
                     if that flame burns again quickly
               not because of another's light

                                             but because of yours. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-02-12 06:33 PM


Sven AD dear heart, this is utterly beautiful, an absolutely fabulous piece for Amy, and I'm sure she will love it. She will see the love and depth of your soul love which clearly shines and offers inspiration and a lift to those that need it.
Utterly truly awesome piece
Take care as always love
                  Mushy
                      
            


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-02-12 06:46 PM


A very sweet piece you've written....I found it inspirational.......great poem!

Nathan

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2001-02-12 07:06 PM


Sven - first I must take a deep breath, and then say bravo. A most beautiful writing, and it came through when I read it.

BC

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4 posted 2001-02-12 08:10 PM


You are wonderful with your tributes to people. Nice work, Sweet Poet Man!

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-02-12 08:15 PM


lovely Sven, as are most your heart pens...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-02-12 08:18 PM


I hope she sees this....she will cherish it!
ParisGrl
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7 posted 2001-02-12 09:03 PM


Sven,

this is lovely, i know she will cherish it for always.

Take Care,
Laura

Aimster
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8 posted 2001-02-12 09:41 PM


John-

hi sweetie. there are no words for how
this has touched me...i pretty much e-
mailed you how i felt...but i wanted to
once again humbly thank you!! thank you
for giving me a smile in my day  

love ya
amy  


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


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