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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-02-05 12:28 PM




Hawaii
beautiful, colorful
swimming, playing, surfing
music, showers, sunshine, flowers
romancing, relaxing, enjoying
exotic pleasures
paradise








Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2001-02-05 08:09 AM


can I come over......oh my this sounds so Exotic.

love the diamond

((hugs))
Charisma

dragonpoe
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Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2001-02-05 08:14 AM


Beautiful little piece, I love the form of this, creating the diamond shape. I will have to try something like this.
Enjoyed it!

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

VAS
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3 posted 2001-02-05 08:15 AM


OOooh, very nice diamonte and graphics as well.  You are too clever and seductive.  We in the more northern section of the northern hemisphere may be prone to envy your climate.

However, I have to say I truly love the changing seasons.

KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2001-02-05 03:47 PM


Thank you all for commenting!
Charisma: Come on over lady! It would be delightful to have you visit me

Dragonpoe: The Diamonte rules go as :
1 1- noun or subject
2 2- adjectives
3 3- ing words
4 4- words about the topic
5 3- ing words
6 2- adj.
7 a synonym for the subject

ENJOY I did one for Valentines

I did seasons for many years. The warm weather here is easier on my health which is a blessing to me. I would love to sneak to the mainland for a visit in fall though
I miss FALL and sometimes snow too...
aloha to all

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-02-05 06:13 PM


Very nice poem...James
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2001-02-05 06:26 PM


Oh wow! I am ready for summer vacation!
Love this poem.
Deb

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-02-05 07:19 PM


KoKo/Cheryl~
This is a delight !
I also enjoyed visiting your web page.
Might have to give that little Diamonte a try.
Thanks for smiling from the island.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
8 posted 2001-02-05 08:44 PM


wow, a delightful piece along with the nice graphic......wonderful poem!

Nathan

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9 posted 2001-02-05 08:51 PM


nice poem..I was in Maui 2 years ago and loved it..thanks for the memories...made me want to write of it.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
10 posted 2001-02-06 03:10 AM


wow....a few people who liked it and needed a vacation! You are all rterrific for your overwhelming response! thanks so much!

Mrage thanks for visiting my very humble page and reading some there. I don't have webpage building kills down too well yet. LOL
Mahalo and God bless all!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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