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Denise

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0 posted 2001-02-04 08:57 PM

Your finely crafted verses play a tune
And splash across the canvas of my mind
A picturesque fair wood or sandy dune;
I’ve seen the world through phrases you’ve designed.
Your pen has caused my tears to freely flow
Cascading falls from sorrows that you share
And wisdom gleaned, on me, you do bestow
You gift my soul because you truly care.
A healing balm I’ve found in clever wit
My burdened heart set free once more to fly
Aloft again in ever graceful flit
Your gentle words, the breeze that lifts me high.

A symphony you softly play for me
Upon the page when you write poetry.

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 02-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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1 posted 2001-02-04 09:04 PM

Denise~
IT'S BEAUTIFUL !
I'm so proud of you !
Such a lovely verse - accompanied by the perfect graphic !
*Hugs*
And I see your smile !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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2 posted 2001-02-04 09:08 PM

Thanks Marge!! Finally!! HUGS

Mike
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3 posted 2001-02-04 09:13 PM

Perfection, Denise is thy name...
a rose petaled symphony, sweet music to my ears...

Denise

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4 posted 2001-02-04 09:21 PM

Thanks Mike! How sweet!

snowpants
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5 posted 2001-02-04 10:48 PM

'A symphony you softly play for me
Upon the page when you write poetry.'

Beautiful, Denise! Wonderful lines you've penned here! I love the graphic too!

sp

...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-02-04 11:03 PM

Denise, you're on a roll with beautiful poetry! Into the library this goes! You have captured what many of us feel when reading fine poetry, this is such a perfect tribute to words...I really love this, your pen is blessed and what a symphony it is! The graphic was an excellent touch

Take care,
Melissa~

Denise

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7 posted 2001-02-04 11:09 PM

Thanks, snowpants and Melissa! Glad you enjoyed! I had some help with the graphics! Thanks Marge, Sharon, Rebecca and Nan!!

Poet deVine

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8 posted 2001-02-04 11:30 PM

Beautiful words, beautiful graphic! Beautiful poet!

Poeminister
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9 posted 2001-02-04 11:46 PM

I love it. Beautifully written.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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10 posted 2001-02-05 12:01 PM

This is dynamite, Denise...it could relate to how I feel about YOUR poetry!

kcsgrandma
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11 posted 2001-02-05 01:09 AM

Gorgeous, Denise, akin to Beethoven's ninth, I would say.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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12 posted 2001-02-05 09:19 AM

WONDERFUL!!!!! Your sonnets Denise are always a symphony to my soul

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Irish Rose
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13 posted 2001-02-05 10:39 AM

Denise,

This is a work of art...a fine sonnet.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Nan

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14 posted 2001-02-05 07:58 PM

La Symphony de la perfection...

Nate Dogg
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15 posted 2001-02-05 08:12 PM

Denise, I loved the concept, the graphic and most importantly, the poem....exquisite rhymes from your pen....great piece!

Nathan

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16 posted 2001-02-05 08:15 PM

Denise,

I loved everything about this. Very well done!!

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Denise

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17 posted 2001-02-05 08:41 PM

Thank you, Sharon, Poeminister, Balladeer, Marilyn, Ruth, Kathleen, Nan, Nate and Lone Wolf for reading and for your wonderful comments! All you fabulous people here at Passions are a pleasure to write for!!

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